I read “Suicide is an Answer…” and the subject matter is far more emotionally charged.

It also shares a near-death experience that most people don’t have.

And it contains one beautifully crafted use of the English language: “ My arms are a roadmap through the worst parts of my life.”

The writing article repeats general information that can be found in thousands of other articles.

You just said you could tell a difference in your writing. I wish you had something more than a feeling.

I went through the same process in my writing, but looked at myself in more specific ways:

Here’s an article about writing that takes on the same themes: writing naturally, honestly, and staying focused completely in the present, instead of listening to all the voices in your head. Plus, it’s full of scientific information and the citations that Medium’s Curators are supposed to value.

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