It’s amazing how much better this reads now.

One note on the headline. I would make the headline into the question and the statement as the subhead. It feels more natural to ask a question and sort of answer it than the other way around. Also, if you’re using the possessive of “humanity,” it should be “humanity’s.”

How the Process of Advancing Knowledge in Academia is Broken

Our need to be certain is holding society back from evolving.

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