Thanks for sharing such a moving story. What’s incredible is how you told a powerful, universal tale of love in less than 300 words.

As a reader, the surprise line (to me at least) “but that day hasn’t yet come.” really hit me.

I hope you don’t mind me asking what would happen if the story just ended on that beautiful line. While the final two sentences are a logical conclusion, they pulled me back out of the deeply emotional place you reached at the end of your journey.

It was like a “You had me at hello” moment, if that makes sense.

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