Your secret is safe with me.

I'm glad I could be of help. My son is trying to break into standup comedy and we discuss jokes, transitions and themes. But the biggest part of my feedback is to help cut out every word or phrase that either slows down the time it takes to get to a big laugh or remove stuff that only gets a couple of laughs.

I look forward to seeing part two of the series in 18 months. It was one of the best stories I've read this month, so it will be worth the wait.

Hope you are doing okay during these perilous times.

BTW, I clapped for your story before but there must have been something wrong with my internet connection, so I clapped again.